
Tired of dreaming of you
My eyes were about to shut
Yet you appeared from afar
Bright and beautiful as ever
Nor could I get you, neither my fingers could caress your being
But for my eyes your appearance was a feast
In a bevy of twinkling stars
Your serene brightness was warming the surrounding
I beheld you with my heart and eyes
looked far yet felt so close you were
I beheld you…
Mesmerising layers of soft wind were unfolding around me
but I was unaware of folds and layers
I just beheld you
My eyes yearned for you
My heart desired for you
But I just beheld you
And my seething soul quenched its thirst
And rejuvenated my veins,
As I beheld you
But then you beveiled yourself in a thick layer of mist
I filled my eyes enough with your light though
You were hidden behind mist
But I kept beholding you with my eyes which cannot see anything but you
And my heart longed for meeting you
How long shall I long for you O my beloved
How long!!
Wow! What a marvellous piece of poetry! Well penned, Saba!
Am glad you liked the shine of half moon, KK.
Keep shining and smiling
Always a pleasure 😊
Absolutely wonderful, Saba. 💖
Am glad the shine of half moon reached you fully 💖
Keep shining and smiling, Flesch
Amazing ❣️
Well penned dear 💕
Thank you dear Aarzu💕
Keep shining and smiling 🤗💖
You too dear 💕 🤗
amazing poetry. very well written.
Am glad you liked it Anil.
Keep shining like a moon
🤩🤗🙏🏻
Chand ka tukda! Beautiful poem.
Kya khubsoorat baat kahi janab ny, “chand ka tukda”
Keep shining and smiling dear Veena
So beautiful! I’m sure your beloved is longing for you just as you are longing for him. It usually works both ways.
Thank you Jo for being here and sharing this heartwarming note🤗💖
Stay blessed!
Thank you!
My pleasure 💕
Thanks for sharing this poetry
Anita
Thank you Anita for visiting 🌺
Missing your posts. Taking this backdoor to wish you the best for the coming year, peace and happiness as you would have them.
Thank you so much for SP for being here with such a beautiful wish. Am so glad.
Wishing you a wonderful year with health and peace.
Great to see such a raw expression in poetic verses,,
Thank you Sanjay for brightening my day😊
Blessings to you!
It’s all my pleasure dear,, i really loved it
Masha Allah….❤️Well written
Thank you 💖