In a placid river of silence
Was throwing the pebbles of contemplation
The tacit splashes adding mystery in surroundings
Peeping through the foliage
Moonlight was laughing at me
Slowly, the moon shower met its end
And najm-us-sah’r* appeared with full of grace
Twinkling so bright
It was happy
It was contented
Didn’t it know its short span of life?
It did know.
But enough was the prostration of submission
To live life with love and grace;
It did know I might not
Shafaq* was arising from the east
So red and soothing
Spreading the sheet of love over the horizon
Didn’t it know its short span of life?
It did know.
It knew the prostration of love
That made every end loveable
Didn’t I know that, did I?
Wanted to fathom the depth
Of the ocean of wisdom
But remained quizzical
Aimed to collect the gems of satisfaction
But my hands remained empty
Was I doing mistake?
Was looking everywhere but not within me
Finally, my placid river of silence told me
Standing at the strand I was
How would I ever go in deep?
Walking around the strand I was
How would I ever collect the gems hidden in deep?
How would I go in deep?
How would I… I cried… I cried…
With prostration of love only, said the pleasant breeze wiping my tears
The prostration of love before the MOST HIGH,
THE MOST LOVING
WHO adorns the twilight with najm-us-sah’r
And embellishes the sunrise with the colours of shafaq
Bow down before HIM with all the love
HE rises you in wisdom with all HIS grace
The moon, the star, the sun, the ocean, the wind
All are in the service of your just your only
Just with one prostration of love
You swim deep
You fly high
You collect gems
You touch the sky
With one prostration of love only
Before the MOST HIGH
WHO has created and still creating this universe
For you and you only
All praise be to ALLAH!
Najm-us-sah’r* morning star
Shafaq* redness at the beginning of sunrise
Beautiful!โคโค
Thank you, Nawazish๐
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Thank you, Fatima ๐โค๐
Amazing full of emotions .
Thank you dear Tara๐
Indeed, all praise be to Allah… โฃ๏ธ ๐ โฃ๏ธ
Soulful piece of writing
Beautiful โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Shukriya Aarzu โค
May Allah bless you
You too dear ๐ โฃ๏ธ ๐
Subhan Allah!
Just one word
โEeman afrozโ
Jazakallah!
May Allah bless you ๐
Amazing… It’s of another level… Totally inspired… Keep writing saba g… May Allah bless u ๐บ
Shukriya Shahzad.
It was just a tiny step
May Allah bless you more
Aameen.. and.. Thanku ๐ท… tiny step equalent giant leap ๐
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Beautiful poem filled with Love and understanding princess ๐ ๐
I can well relate to the red sun ๐๐๐
Thank you my beloved Uncle ๐๐๐
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Very powerful words ‘Bow down before HIM with all the love, HE rises you in wisdom with all HIS grace’….
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Jazakallah! Iqra
May Allah bless you more
Bravo ma belle jeune soeur, bravo ! You’re writing with your heart, and your heart is shining ๐
Thank you my dearest twin ๐ค๐๐ค
Subhan Allah! Alhamdulillah! Such a calm read this is. Peaceful and serene. May Allah azza wa jall guide everyone to this Prostration. Ma sha Allah.
Jazak Allah Khair
Ameen!
Jazakallah! Muntazir for being here ๐
Pretty astounding ๐๐๐ผ
Thank you. Am glad you liked it
Thanks for new good post
Thank you so much Mazhar for your continuous support
Beautiful and grateful love !! ๐
Thank you ๐๐ค๐
Beautiful poem Saba.
Thank you, Ma’am ๐๐
My pleasure.โค๏ธ
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Thank you so much for your kindness, and I hope that you enjoy by blog ๐น๐ค
That’s exemplary!! ๐๐Such depth in your writing ..
Indeed, All praise be to Allah ๐
Thank you so much, Samreen for being here.
May Allah bless you ๐
Pleasure. Wishing the same for you๐
No words to describe how it feels after reading this poem…
How you have presented the temporary nature of life and how its beauty could last eternally by remaining faithful, hopeful and always reminding the Presence of Allah in our heart and in our life. Only then we can shine like najmus sahr. So beautiful, soulful, wonderful and graceful.
And you concluded it in your beautiful words.
These colours of life, the shine of beauty is all ephemeral. What is eternal is our for our Almighty Allah.
May Allah fill our hearts with HIS love and HIS remembrance only, Ameen
Your writings are always beautiful and inspiring…๐๐๐
Boht shukriya ๐ค
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Bohot khoob๐บ๐บ๐บโค๏ธ
Shukriya Iram๐๐ค๐
No other words, just Subhan Allah Ma sha Allah amazing โคโคโคโคโค!!
Jazakallah! Iqra
May Allah bless you more โค๐โค
BarakAllahu feekum ๐
This is so beautiful and magical! You’re an amazing poet ๐
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But your work is exceptional ๐
Aww thanks Saba! ๐๐
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Wallahi this is so amazing โค
Jazakallah! Insaโค
May Allah bless you more ๐
BarakAllahโค
Ameenโค
Such a wonderful and beautiful poem Saba! Love portrayed in such a deep and amazing way. Keep writing Saba!๐๐บ๐
Thank you so much Sir Steve for your appreciation๐ค๐๐
We are to spread love and pick up the thrones that hurt others; let’s do it together ๐ค
Absolutely Saba, something we need to do together. I hope you are having a most wonderful day!๐๐บ๐ป๐
Alhamdulillah! Everything going with a smooth flow ๐ค
Sweetie has become a grandmother๐๐บ๐ป
Hey, that’s great, a grandmother! Give her an extra hug from me!๐๐
Meow, meow=Me too!๐ป๐ป
Thank you
Meoooooooow ๐บ๐ป๐๐